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Monday, March 18, 2013

New Story: A Short Folk Tale

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I've been hard at work on a fantasy novel lately, which I why I haven't been sharing shorts stories much lately. I hope to be finished (with the 2nd draft at least) by the time I'm in law school this fall. But I also decided that I have written enough folk tales within that fantasy world that they merit a fleshed out compilation, so I have a new short folk tale to share with you all. I hope to write a large number of these in the future (currently I have three) so be on the lookout for more! This one comes from the Eastern Islands, an archipelago of small islands in the southeast with a mild climate.

Rogar and the Wind Spirit
The young girl Rogar had loved since they were children reached an age suitable to wed. Her father, a wealthy baron, declared that the winner of a grand tournament of strength would earn her hand because he wished his grandchildren to be warriors of legendary might.
The tournament drew fine warriors from across many islands, for the young girl was lovely and fair and attracted many suitors. But Rogar was skinny and short, and he could never hope to succeed in a contest of strength.
Rogar was distraught. He walked along the ocean side, kicking sand and weeping. There he came upon a Wind Spirit who sat on the water’s edge contemplating death.
“What is it you think on, Spirit?” asked Rogar.
“I think on death,” the Spirit replied. “I wonder why the lives of men must end while mine endures. Since the Beginning everything of this world rots and decays but I, for I am wind, and when I am powerful the world’s creations bend at my whims and when I am soft as a whisper my embrace warms the living and calms the seas. What it feels like to die and feel no more is unknown to me. What is it you think on, human?”
“I think on strength,” Rogar replied. “The woman I love is being auctioned to the strongest of men, but look on me! The skin on my flabby arms sag and my knobby knees tremble supporting my small girth. I can hardly lift a sword nor cast a line to sea. What it feels like to be strong enough to fight for the one I love is unknown to me.”
“I possess the strength you desire,” said the Spirit. “I will give you the strength of ten thousand men in return for the promise that you return to me at this spot in the throes of death so I might observe its purpose.”
Rogar accepted at once. The Spirit fed Rogar a fragment of the Eternal Wind and bade him farewell. Rogar gave the Spirit profound thanks and entered the tournament. The crowd laughed at his scrawny figure standing next to giants of men, but Rogar smiled, knowing his secret.
None compared to Rogar’s strength. He dispatched of the other suitors with hardly a care and stunned all when he stood alone at the end. The young girl’s father proudly proclaimed Rogar suitable to wed his daughter.
Rogar and the young girl rushed into an embrace, but in his passion Rogar crushed her body and squeezed the life out of her. Overcome with grief, he returned to the sands where he found the Wind Spirit in the same spot, contemplating death.
“My beloved has perished,” Rogar cried. “I come to you in the throes of death. You may now observe my demise as you requested, Spirit.”
Thus Rogar threw himself into the ocean and drowned himself. The Wind Spirit ceased contemplating death, for it had learned that men are cursed with death in return for the blessing of love. 


Bonus: Here's the action-packed 30-second movie trailer for the home movie of my 7-year-old roommate Kalmia I'm working on. Hold onto your seats!


Thursday, June 24, 2010

Novel Excerpt - Prologue of Outside the Crystal

Note: These are the first pages of the first book.

Before the Nembath Incident, when Raychel still could walk around in broad daylight, she and Braden used to sneak out of school from time to time and explore the nearby forest. Together they discovered a pond as wide as their school building, a place they thought belonged only to them until they found a can clumsily wedged in the mud, sloppy shoe tread surrounding the spot. Even so, they never saw another person at the pond, so it was theirs. They named it Frog Pond, after the nice-sized green creatures that lived there. They loved to show off the power of their legs; Raychel and Braden had never managed to catch one.

A small mound near the south bank overlooked Frog Pond. It wasn’t much of a mound, but it was just high enough to see the snowy tips of the twin peaks, Pilorite and Silorite, if Raychel stood on the tips of her toes and the sky was clear. The only place she could see all of Frog pond was on top of that mound, all except a small gulf that protruded eastward, ducking out of sight behind the everglades. The mound was Raychel’s favorite place around Frog Pond. Being able to see everything, from the extremities of the water to the tops of the mountains, Raychel felt more confident in herself than she ever could in the classroom, drilled with Geography.

“No, Port Youl is here,” her teacher had said to her earlier, pointing to the map. “Close to the Northern Islands.”

Raychel muttered, “Whatever.” The teacher heard it.

“Port Youl is a beautiful city, Raychel,” he said. “Don’t you want to visit sometime? You’ll have to know where it is first.”

Raychel despised her teacher’s voice. He pronounced her name as if it were missing the Y, a two-syllable word like the Oriathian name. “I don’t ever want to leave Brodaw,” she said with conviction.

“Now you’re just being stubborn. Not even to Nembath, the magnificent Lightning City?” He spread his arms and salesman smile wide.

“Lightning City,” said Raychel flatly. “That sounds safe.”

Note in her hand, she was sent to visit the school counselor, again. She threw the note away and slipped away to the forest. Braden found her on the top of the hill, meditating with her legs crossed. “I told the teacher I had to go to the bathroom,” he said.

Braden’s favorite place around Frog Pond was not the mound but in the everglades, on the bank. He said he liked the mud and the feeling that he couldn’t be seen. Raychel always felt like resisting when he wanted to crouch down in the frigid murk. They would dirty their clothes and return home wet and shivering, their shoes making nauseating squishing noises, to parents who would surely guess where they had been instead of class. He didn’t think about that, it seemed, as much as she did. He felt more in touch with nature when he waded knee-deep along the pond’s swampy bank. There was no resisting Braden, and as much as she preferred the mound she preferred him more.

Braden undid the strings on his dirt and grass stained bag. “I brought something from home,” he said, shuffling his hand around inside. “Dad let me borrow to help catch a frog.” His fingers scraped against the canvass sides until he found what he was looking for and eagerly withdrew it. His fist was wrapped around a small cable, a miniature fan dangling at the end. Opening his fist and bending over, he showed her a small, wooden, banana-shaped object with a rectangular hole carved into the center, inside of which was a tangle of mesh. Raychel leaned over with curiosity, and her scalp nearly brushed against his.

“What is it?” asked Raychel.

“It’s a boat,” said Braden. “The fan moves it forward, and I control it with the remote control. Here, hold this.” Before Raychel could say anything she was holding the boat and the sound of Braden’s hand clawing against the canvas resumed. Raychel lifted a fragment of the mesh with her index finger, cautiously contemplating its shape.

“Is this a net?” she said.

“Yep,” said Braden. “Got it!” He extracted a compact black box that looked like a child’s building block but with a small joystick planted in the middle. “It’s pretty simple,” he said, flipping a switch with an assured click. The fan struggled against Raychel’s steadying hand, and she politely dropped it as if startled by bumping into a person’s shoulder on the street. Braden caught it with his free hand. “Be careful, Raychel!” he exclaimed not giving the impression that he was upset or worried that the machine would break, not for a minute. He pronounced her name like it was supposed to be pronounced.

“What does your dad use it for?” said Raychel. “Catching frogs?”

“Hm,” Braden considered. “I’m not sure, actually. I know there’s a camera on the bottom, so he can take remote pictures in dangerous waters, from a safe distance. I’m not sure what the net’s for, though. I’m not really into that Hero Team thing, you know.”

In the middle of Frog Pond, closest to the east side near the mountains, there was a small island where the frogs liked to spend their time. The only other times Raychel and Braden had tried to capture a frog was when it ventured to the far shore, an irregular occurrence. Braden promised that when the mountain winds died down and the air warmed up again, they would swim together to the island, where they would surely be able to catch a frog. Raychel hated swimming, but she nodded anyway.

Braden and Raychel crouched together in the everglades, watching the island in the middle of Frog Pond, their backs to the mound. Braden held the boat steady in his hand, pinching the motor’s blades to keep it still but ready. Raychel’s butt was getting moist in the mud. She could feel the water spreading through the fabric of her school clothes. She tried not to think about how her parents would react, not because of their reluctance to send them through the wash again but because she would have to admit she skipped class. She felt the dirty water bleeding through her underwear, cold and itchy, and she had to bite her tongue not to squirm. She glanced at Braden. His blue eyes were locked on the island, his eyebrows down in deep concentration, making blubbery lines in his young forehead.

“Isn’t there a better way to catch a frog?” Raychel whispered. “Isn’t using the net kind of cruel?”

“We’re catching it either way,” said Braden just as softly, not changing his expression. There were still no frogs, as if they knew the two kids were up to something.

Eventually Raychel’s clothes reached their peak of saturation, or she had stopped noticing its spread. The water was cold and her feet were numb. She and Braden had spent many days together here on the banks of the pond before, but never before had they waited in one place for so long. Usually they walked the circumference of the pond, taking large steps that lifted their knees to their chests, eyes darting about at the slightest peripheral movement. Now it felt that they were preparing for an ambush. Raychel couldn’t help but feel the fear of the unseen frog that was to be Braden’s first victim. While Raychel’s interest in frog-catching stemmed from a mild excitement about having a pet – there was a jar with holes punched in the lid in her bag – Raychel knew Braden wanted something different. He wanted to beat the frog in a physical and mental competition, to test his own ability to plan ahead and outsmart another living, thinking creature. He was more like his father than he was willing to admit.

Suddenly Braden leaned forward anxiously, pursing his lips tightly together, and released the boat’s motor to purr noiselessly underwater. Raychel looked out towards the island, following Braden’s eyes. There, on the end of the island, squatted a fat frog, facing the opposite direction, its skin glistening in the sun almost like plastic. It looked like a plastic windup toy until it took a deep breath and Raychel heard it croak. It was the perfect target for Braden: facing away, lethargically motionless in a patch of reviving sun, slowed by obesity. The frog didn’t stand a chance, Raychel knew as the boat inched closer along the surface of the water, the mesh inside poised to launch. Soon the net would wrap around the creature and it would flop around, kicking wildly with its uselessly muscular legs, hurling itself without direction in a blind, desperate panic.

Raychel knew she had to warn the frog. Surreptitiously reaching her hand out, watching Braden’s eyes to make sure he didn’t notice, she felt her fingertips glide invisibly through the barrier of air between her and a pebble on the faraway island’s edge. She felt the tips of her fingers achieve distance, and she knew that if she were to wave she would have seen stony fingers oscillating twenty meters away. But the shape of her fingers had become gray, rounded, and small. She felt the cold, steady will of the stone in the tips of her fingers, and with it the instinctual tingle to freeze in her place and remain stoically still, forever. But the urge was small and easy to resist. She moved her hand to the side, watching the distant pebbly fingertip hover above the pond’s surface with the rest of her hand. She took another quick glance at Braden; he was too concentrated on the frog to notice the floating stone. Raychel released the pebble from her influence, feeling the relief of warm blood pulsing through her digits, and dropping it into the water. It made no sound Raychel could hear, but it was enough for the frog to dive into the pond with alarm.

“Ah!” cried Braden with frustration. “We were so close!”

“Close is good,” said Raychel sarcastically. “Braden, I’m cold. Let’s go back to the mound.”

Braden began to reel the boat back in, his eyes still fixed on the spot where the frog had been, disappointed longing replacing the frenzied concentration of moments before. “Fine,” he said.

On the way back to the mound Raychel couldn’t help but shiver, and Braden wrapped his arm around her shoulder. He wasn’t cold at all. He was so warm.

It was this practice of sneaking away from school that, by a stroke of dumb luck, saved Raychel’s life.

Tuesday, December 1, 2009

Welcome To December! I Give You Maps

Ciao, Tutti!

It feels like it was November only yesterday...

Nanowrimo is officially over, and I want to congratulate everyone who tried their hand at novelling, or even if they brought coffee for someone else who was novelling. It was a lot of fun, and it's not over yet! While I did reach 75,000 words, I am another 30,000 at least from finishing up with my plot. Onward we go!

For you all, I have the gift of the maps of my novel's fantasy world, which I had drawn a while ago but never managed to scan in. If you want to see the images bigger, just click on them. That's all it takes. The city where all the action takes place is called Port Youl, which is in the land of Oriath. I will show the maps in expanding size order:


The city of Port Youl



The land of Oriath. Port Youl is up North. Most of the characters are from the city of Brodaw, in the West.



The World, roughly. Cora, one of the characters, is from East Homeland. Raychel and Tarana's families are from Jerroldia.


The city Port Youl is not actually modeled after San Francisco, even though it has that bay thing. I thought mostly of Genova, Italy, when I drew this up.

My World Map needs another draft.

In other news, I am the Sunday series organizer for Flaming Fire's Eternal Christmas installation project! Yay! I am scheduling all sorts of writing days as we speak, where we will have some dynamite holiday-style fiction and poetry. That starts this Sunday, December 6 at 3:00 and will continue each Sunday until the space closes in early January (that's right: even when I'm not going to be in New York). If you've got a free Sunday afternoon and want to see what's going on, come on by. 525 Atlantic Ave, Brooklyn. Check out the site linked to on the side of the blog.

In addition to the awesome reading going on, the Flaming Fire running band will be performing on a community fair of sorts on December 9, which is a Wednesday. If you're wondering what that means, it's just what it sounds like: a band that runs, singing, down the streets of New York. It will be amazing. The official opening night of the space is this Friday!

If you can't make any of those events, the Flaming Fire full-on performance, which should feature some new music we've been working up for the past month or so, will be on Friday, December 18. And, of course, you can count on me to continue to update with news as it comes my way.

Now, time to stop procrastinating. Back to work!

-Sam goldsmith

P.S. Why can't all holidays be as cool as Thanksgiving? Seriously, I had a great weekend, and I hope you did, too.

Sunday, November 22, 2009

Okay, I'm sick of Typing (But not so much that I won't write this blog)

Ciao, Tutti!

I've now written 207 pages of my novel in 22 days . It's been a ton of fun, but it's also been more than a little exhausting, especially since I'm not all that good at typing.

Anyway, I've already posted two excerpts, both from the first 50 pages, and I figure I should post again now that I've written another 150. Unedited, as Nanowrimo intended, of course. Then it's back to my research paper!

I can't wait for Thanksgiving.

"Outside the Crystal" pg 160

Braden was awake the next morning before anyone else, he thought. He got out of bed and cracked the joints in his back, then trudged over to the main room where he made himself a pot of coffee. He ran his fingers through his hair as the machine worked, and he checked how much time was left every few seconds. Eventually he gave up trying and closed his eyes, leaning against the refrigerator door. When the coffee maker beeped it made Braden jolt upright, like he hadn’t realized he was asleep. He tried whacking the coffee machine like it was an alarm clock, yawned, and poured himself a cup. Raychel could smell it from where she was. Coffee was one of those Brodaw things she had never quite gotten used to. She preferred tea.

She watched him walk over to the sofa and crash down on it, spilling a spot onto his wrist, which made him wince and transfer the cup to his offhand, sucking himself where he had been burned. Settled down now, he slowly drank from his mug, fondling the scar under his eye with his fingers between sips. The scar had almost healed, but a thin line the same color of his skin certainly showed in the middle of his bags.

“Would you like some fruit?” Raychel asked. She stood up.

“No thanks,” he said. His voice was harsh, and he had to clear his throat. “I’m fine.”

Raychel knew he hadn’t seen her there, but he didn’t act surprised to see her. She shrugged and walked over to the refrigerator, shining her hand through the air to connect with the door and open it before she arrived. “Are you always up this early?”

“Most of the time,” she said. She dug through the bowl on the bottom shelf and pulled out an apple. “I like to meditate with the sunrise. I always have, even when you hid me.” She was disappointed he had never noticed before.

“You must be tired,” he said.

“Not really.” She tossed the apple away from her, then shinder her fingers through the air to catch it before it reached the floor. It was a little exercise she liked to do to stay sharp. “The meditation is pretty relaxing.”

“Mm.” Braden sipped his coffee.

“You’re not usually awake this early,” said Raychel. She nibbled at the apple.

“There’s a lot on my mind.” Braden balanced the cup between his knees and, with the utmost care, stretched his arms up, taking what sounded like a relieving yawn that would be enough to banish evil spirits from his soul. “There’s always a lot on my mind, but this time there’s more. I think the triangle and circle gang is making its move. Harbor Mason showing up, alone, was not an accident.”

“And I’m sure fighting is easier without sleeping,” said Raychel sarcastically.

“I’ve been on edge a lot lately, is what I’m trying to say.”

At that moment Raychel wanted to walk across the room and sit behind Braden and rub his shoulders to move the tension away from him, but all she said was, “Let me know if there’s anything I can do.”

“You can let me do all the worrying,” he responded. “And you can make up for my lack of sleep.”

Raychel rolled her eyes, suddenly agitated. “You’re always trying to do things yourself like that,” she scolded in her slow, patient voice. “You’re like Aber, risking himself for our sakes. But I can help you. Are you too stressed out to notice that I want to help?”

Braden looked deep into Raychel’s purple eyes, without raising his head all the way, looking tired and sad. “Raychel, there was a time in my life when all I ever noticed was you.”

Raychel didn’t know how to respond to this, so Braden got his way again.

She thought about the conversation while she and Cora worked together in the kitchen at the food center, the Hero Team minus one donating their couple of hours of community service together. She liked to replay the sentence in her mind over and over, because it made her shiver with excitement. “There was a time in my life when all I ever noticed was you.” Shiver. “There was a time in my life when all I ever noticed was you.” Shiver.

To be continued...

Fun fact: This passage ended on word 49,500. That's as close to 50,000 you'll ever get on this blog.

Okay, I know you don't care about that. But I love me my statistics, which is part of the reason Nanowrimo-style writing works so well for me.

I want turkey!

-Sam goldsmith

P.S. I've always been meaning to post something about how awesome Brother Ali's new CD, "Us," is. I'll get around to it as some point...

Saturday, November 14, 2009

Novel Excerpt Part 2

Ciao, Tutti!

I don't really have that much to talk about today, but now that I've written 100 pages of my novel I feel that I should probably post another excerpt. Especially since I've been wanting to post this for a while now, though schoolwork hasn't allowed me such freedom.

A quick bit of disappointing news: the Flaming Fire installation project I had been talking about before? Yeah, funny story. Turns out the person hooking us up with the space has failed to do the job so far, which was supposed to be done 2 weeks ago. 'Aint art grand? I'll let you know when I know more.

And now, without further introduction, another unedited excerpt. It's a short one today, about music! Enjoy if you dare!

Outside the Crystal - Excerpt #2

Raychel had the urge to go to Tarana’s empty room and listen to music. Raychel never thought about listening to music before, but she used to do it with Tarana in her room, the sound almost too loud to talk over. Tarana was a certified audiophile, and she spent years scrounging together the perfect sound system. The speakers were so tall that Raychel couldn’t see the tops, and the legs were all made of triangles to reduce excess vibrations. “Sit on the futon, right here in the middle, if you want the sound that’s so good it’ll give you a sugar rush, okay?” said Tarana, flipping a Reamer Buoy disc into the player as Raychel braced for impact. “You lose some quality with digital music,” Tarana shouted over the singing. “Someday I want Cy to make an analogue version of amplification, like they had in the old days.” Cy flipped through the Glowstick computer magazine, lying back on Tarana’s bed.

“What?” said Raychel.

As much as Raychel didn’t remember being drawn to the music, she couldn’t help but feel it inside her now. Not Reamer Buoy, whose northern jubilant blues style was too upbeat for now, but something else. Reamer Buoy had a place in Raychel’s consciousness nonetheless. Thinking of it reminded her of Tarana sitting next to her on the futon, wrapping her arm around Raychel’s shoulder (even though Raychel would only tense up in response), smelling faintly of sweat and makeup, saying, “Now isn’t that the most awesome thing you’ve ever heard? Tell me you don’t think that’s awesome. Oh! I love this song! Get out of the middle seat, Raychel!” It reminded Raychel of “Let’s make a pact to stick together, okay?” It reminded her of Jerroldian slang, and it even sounded like Jerroldian slang when she thought about it. The music smelled faintly of sweat and makeup, and it felt like an arm wrapped around her shoulder.

To be continued...

Don't forget, folks: comments are available! Everything unanswered in this blog is still done for a reason, don't worry. So if you want to know more about Jerroldian slang or why I put a "Y" in Rachel's name or why I capitalized the word "Glowstick," feel free to ask.

...please?

-Sam goldsmith

Sunday, November 8, 2009

Novel Excerpt

Ciao, Tutti!

For the first time ever, I will be posting an excerpt from my Nanowrimo novel during the month of November! I know, you can barely contain yourselves. There will be other excerpt postings in the future as well, seeing as there are two scenes I really want to post right now and can't make up my mind. The excerpts will be unedited, the way November intended. Be sure to follow my progress on the left-hand side of the blog if you have nothing better to do (you know you don't). The goal is 50,000, and I'm almost 40% there!

But first, a word of clarity: The band Flaming Fire is indeed corrupting my soul. Just in case there was ever any doubt. Now you don't have to worry that it's affecting me, because you know for sure.

You're welcome.

"Outside the Crystal" (working title) Excerpt

The door to Cy’s room was cracked open about a third of the way, but the inside seemed to be pitch black, no lights on at all. Raychel tapped on the door cautiously with the tops of her knuckles and whispered, “Cy? Your door’s open.” Hopefully he was asleep. He was probably the one who needed it most tonight. But he wasn’t, and the light turned on. Cy pushed the door aside, standing in his underwear in the threshold, scratching his stubble that had already started to form. Raychel tried not to wince because of the smell. Behind him a mixture of clothes, glass, fruit peels, plastic bottles, computer parts, and other unidentifiables were scattered across his floor, bed, chair, and desk.

“Hi, Raychel,” he yawned, rubbing his eye and standing out of the way to let her enter. She watched her feet as she did. “You didn’t wake me up, don’t worry.”

“Hello Cy,” she croaked, trying as hard as she could not to appear disturbed by the mess.

Cy knocked a cardboard box over with his foot to clear a path to the bed, then sat on it, his bulky body making it bounce without squeaking. He laughed without vocalizing, staring between his knees. “Oh, man, this place must look like a mess,” he said. “I must look like a mess.”

“No,” said Raychel automatically. She brushed a crumpled up Kurly O’s wrapper with her foot like Cy had, cautiously clearing a path to a chair she could sit in. “Actually, yes, this place is a mess. But I don’t mind.”

“It’s not supposed to look like this,” said Cy. “You shouldn’t be all right with it.”

“Cy, I don’t mind because I understand.” Raychel bent down to pick up a miniscule figurine, a wooden construction worker the size of a joint on her finger. He was missing an arm and paint was chipping off his helmet, but he still smiled. “We’re all kind of a mess right now.”

“This whole world’s a mess,” said Cy. “I know, everyone always says that, but it’s true. That’s why everyone says it, because it’s true. Think about it, Raychel. What happened to Tarana is happening every day, all the time, to people all over the world. Everyone’s losing loved ones, and everyone’s in a mess like this.” He sniffed. “I can’t believe that so many people in the world feel the way I feel right now.”

Raychel didn’t know how to respond to that, so she looked over the figurine. She recognized it from the model city Cy was always working on whenever he had spare time, even back in Brodaw. Raychel looked to the corner of the room where the city sat, separated from the ground by a slab of wood so it could be lifted and turned to make a better working angle. Miniature skyscrapers were meticulously painted, windows so real that it really looked like they were reflecting the light bulb as if it were the sun. But, unlike usual, a section of the city seemed to be missing, as if a miniature mechanical rhino had crashed through the edge of town and capped off the top of a bunch of the buildings.

“I’m sorry to sound like this,” said Cy, sniffing again. “I’m really happy you came to visit. I just…” Cy sighed on the edge of his bed. “I don’t really know what else to say.”

Raychel understood. “You were lucky to be so close to her,” she said, setting the figurine at the base of the broken buildings and making her way to the chair.

“I don’t feel lucky right now,” he whispered.

Raychel tried to change the subject, gesturing towards the model city. “What happened to Cyberg?” she asked.

Cy made the effort to chuckle. “I kicked it,” he said. “I kicked a lot of things, but that one gave in the easiest.”

“But it was your city. You worked so hard on it.”

“But all it takes is one kick to break it down.” Cy stretched out his back, reaching his arms high above his head. Raychel heard some of his joints crack. “I’ll have to rebuild it, when I can think straight.”

Cy had been involved in building models ever since Raychel had met him in Brodaw, and this city, Cyberg, was the most ambitious project he had taken on yet. He had plotted out the entire plan on a sheet of square paper two meters long which he used to keep hanging on his wall and had taken down once he started the actual building process. Raychel remembered the enormous effort he took as they evacuated Brodaw to keep everything perfectly intact on that same slab of wood, walking in slow motion as he held it in front of him like an tray of overflowing lava, shushing anyone who so much as said something.

“See, Raychel? Here’s the rubber factory, and here are the people protesting the stench, and here are the crying babies, because crying babies are always the most convincing argument. If you’re ever upset with something, just find a crying baby and say, ‘See? She’s upset, too!’ All right, for this one you have to bend over the city, so be careful not to touch anything. Here’s the waveball stadium in the center of town and all the wealthy waveball players who don’t even notice the beggars who are all around the stadium. Here’s the hill across from the river, where all the kids go to make out while their parents aren’t looking. See, there are two kids making out right there, under the tree. But – little do they know! – there’s a pigeon in the tree about to poop right on their heads. See, I painted a little glob coming out of its butt. Come on, Raychel, it’s not that gross. Just imagine it’s a white worm trying to work its way into the bird. Now that’s gross. Oh, over here’s the evil genius, Dr. Mighty Monstrous Morphing Man, developing his Ultimate Death Ray of Doom in his mother’s basement. See his outline through the curtains? But he messed up, see, and he exposed one of the wires, so now he’s getting electrocuted. See how I painted his hair all spikey? Here are two people having sex on the sixth story of their building, and here’s everyone watching with binoculars from the bushes across the street. That guy has a video camera, see? See?”

To be continued...

It's raw, I know, but that's what Nanowrimo is. Editing will happen in good time.

Now, time to study. Nah, my soul's too corrupt.

-Sam goldsmith

P.S. Don't forget, comments have been enabled! Take advantage!

P.P.S. Up to 20,000 words! Boo Yah!